October 25, 1951. Dr. Klaus H. Rothfels Department of Botany University of Toronto Toronto 5, Canada. Dear Rothfels: Your ms. (private copy) arrived a few days ago, not long after the original was received by the Editors of Genetics, which is now located in this Department. It will not surprise you that the Editors asked me to review it, but there does not seem to be mich point in pretending anonymity. I have asked them, therefore, to return the original for your use in any revisions, while my annotations are madé in red on the draft copy you sent me. Most of the comments should be self-explanatory; a few are of a more general nature, as follows: You have, of course, formal permission to refer to any of our unpublished work. Howeverg rather than cite it ea such, I suggest a citation to the CSH manuscript: Lederberg,J., Lederberg,E.M., Zinder, N.D., and Lively, E.R., 1951 Recombination analysis of bacterial heredity. Cold Spr. Harb. Symp. 16: In Press. The reference may be completed in proof if the pagina- tion is learned in time. There are very few if dny places where this would not be preferable. The reference to Cavalli (p.2) is: Cavalli, L.L. 1950 La sessualita nei batteri. Boll. Ist. Sieroterap. Milano 29:21-29. The same thing might be done for Delamater: mitnme his CSH paper, A new cytological basis for bacterial geneticsyyete. Finally, some points of our unpublished work may be covered in ay chapter in Genetics in the 20th Century (MacMillan 1951), for which I regret there are no reprints. I hope you will note my suggested amendation of your acknowledgment, for which I thank you. Was your abbreviation of "N. & N."* intentional? If so, it should be explicit: e.g., Newcombe and Nyholm (N.&N.). If the editors accept this, the same might be done for L. or L. et al., The usage of Het 4s, I think, quesaionable. It was an unfortunate ab- breviation for a hypothetical factor leading to nondisjunction or restttution. The resulting exceptions should, I think, be called heterozygotes, persistent diploids, or unreduced exceptions. Het and the crossover regdons a, b, ¢ etc. should be underlined. Four points of gontent rather than form: The discussion of L, is still somewhat obscure, both as to the hypothesis for its origin and the experimentak justification for it. p/8 mehtions Leucine-inhibited prototrophs, but suggests they are elaborated upon later, which I cannot find. Their occurrenge might be emphasised more clearly. Also, what account is taken of L-Lm as a possible missing class? Do you have any direct evidmaee (e.g. from TL crosses) of its ocuurence? If you happen to have saved an L+Lm- culture, I should appreciate the opportunity of handling it. I think there may be some hedging on the revertibijity of M@. I have never gotten 2 protottroph from 58-161: Have you? If not, it might be worthwhile saying so. This may be picayune (except for some of our data), but linearity is really well established by this work only for Lac-V,-L-T, and the inclusion of Min the series is more inferential. Miss Fried has been repeating some of the S° x TL crosses in Mesupplemented medium that I wrote you about earlier, and can find no evidence that M and Lew are linked.The frequency of "a 0.0." is detergined by something else (segregation anomaly?)4 I don't mean to insist on this point which is based on work largely suggested by your paper, but I thought the comment would interest you whether or not you wished to amend the ms. The latter also applies to the next point of information which relates to the qgestion of p.16. T-L- mugeagatiomexfs segregants from your TL- eross give markedly abnormal or rather novel linkage behavior, in my one experience. If you can confirm this, I would be delighted. The alteration appears, however, to influence the relative frequency of “a C.0.", rather than the other relationships along the arm. Would you be interested to do a comparable study of TL-sgoplemented crosses using such a parent? - perhaps this is what you meant by the backeross studies you were tempted to do, This is about all. To turn to less officious matters, I hope that you did submit a discussicn based on this work for the CSH volume. I had con- flicting reports from Newcombe and Mrs. Warren, both of whom should have known. Thanks for pointing out that slip about interference. I remember our talking about it, but am not sure whether itcwas finally corrected. We've gotten onjo a curious byway on streptomycin resistance. Did you notive that many S recombinants in your cresses were unusually mutable to , s’ ? This sees to be the case and suggests that the mitation from S° to S may occur normally in two steps, the first stage being the highly mutable s§, Sincerely, Joshua Lederberg